From the estate of Robert Justman -
Assistant director/associate producer for
Star Trek Classic and The Next Generation -
Original set used script reports - Classic Star Trek
--A Private Little War - Dated September 25th 1967
1 page -
Bottom two reports have no date or script title apparent but appear to be from
--The Lights of Zetar (1969)
7 pages - Some fasinating reading...
A few examples..
Page 67 --Please use restraint when filming the scenes involving Nona and Apella's soldiers since violence against women is a particularly sensitive area.
Page 64 --Caution on impact as Kirk is hit on the head with a rock
Page 8 --No Damage to atomic reactors --Better STAR TREK jargon: No Damage to the warp drive, (Or warp engines)
Page 10 --A paper in his hand - Suggest this should be an electronic clipboard
Page 13 --There are 450 people on board - Correct figure is 430. Suggest change
Page 18 --Lt. Uhura get me Scotty on the intercom - Proper STAR TREK procedure is for Kirk to punch up engineering on his arm intercom. Suggest delete Uhura from this action here
Page 19 --A pair of solar beams - Ths seems to be a high-falutin' name for a space age flashlight
Page 25 --Where's the electrical field now - Lightning is an electrical discharge, not a field Interchanging the two terms cannot be supported scientifically
Scene 59 --Commander James Kirk - properly phrased: Captain James Kirk. Advise change
Scene 72 --Multiple slides light up on large screens completely encircling the room - The conference room does not not have this equipment
Scene 72 --Date of birth 5701 - This birthdate would make mira 28 years old. Suggest delete birthdate as confusing if given in Star Trek terms which are only used as reference in framework of inter-stellar velocities
Scene 74 --Scanner - Better term is sensors
Scene 115 --At absolute zero all molecular movement in matter ceases - This is not a true Statement
Scene 115 --Starfleet Headquarters - Proper term is Starfleet Command
